Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Unpublished 89. Through the Fire

Toki slowly awoke from an alcohol-induced stupor to a heavy weight upon his chest and an acrid smoke in his nostrils. He coughed weakly, fighting the urge to vomit again. His fingers not wrapped around the neck of a vodka bottle scrabbled in futility at the wooden beam lying painfully across him.

Then, just like that, the weight was gone, and he was being hoisted over a shoulder, carried across a broad back.

Toki pressed his nose into Nathan's back, contentedly breathing in the smoke and the musk.

Nathan was here, for him, and that's all that really mattered.

4 comments:

dysturbation said...

Aww, lady. Is sweet. <3

riverotter7 said...

All Toki ever needed -- ever! -- was just to know that someone cares.

{{{Hugs you}}}

FeralToki said...

It's something that so many of us need...

And truly, if more people actually cared, wouldn't the world be just a little better for it...?

riverotter7 said...

There's a quote by a 19th century writer Edith Wharton Wheeler I like very much that pretty much says it all:

"So many gods, so many creeds,
So many paths that wind and wind
When just the act of being kind
Is all this sad world needs."

I found it when I was in my early 20's and very angry from the final rape. Since then I have tried very hard to be kind to people and be the change I wanted to be in the world.

{{{hugs you again}}}